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Fracture

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Fracture


Meredith, aka viva9626






A news helicopter zooms over a railroad track. A freight train zooms by. The copter veers to the left into a clearing.
(In the copter)
PIOLIT: Helicopter 5311 to control tower. Helicopter 5311 to control tower, requesting clearance to land in unauthorized landing zone.
RADIO: Reason for clearance, 5311.
PIOLIT: Reason is for hill picture of the city, control tower
RADIO: pause. Clearance granted 5311
PIOLIT put radio speaking thingy up. Hit a bunch of buttons then veered in for the picture. (Outside of copter) Copter is about to land in the clearing when all of a sudden a wolf jumped in the clearing. The pilot yelped then stopped in midair. The wolf glared at the copter and sat up. The pilot grabbed the radio speaker and flipped a switch. He started yelling random curse words into the speaker. The wolf screamed too and transformed in to a werewolf.
The pilot stopped.
PILOT: Sorry! I’m so sorry! I didn’t know! I-
The werewolf stood up and jumped at the copter. Zoom in on the werewolf’s face. It’s a pure black werewolf with a cloth necklace. The wolf is about 7 feet tall with long winter coat fur. The fur is tipped with silver on her face to shine, almost glow. Her legs are like cat legs, allowing long strides like a cheetah. Her arms are long and spindly, allowing her to stand on all fours and look somewhat like a dog; no limbs are longer. The werewolf has on a necklace. The necklace is gold with an ebony wolf head amulet. The wolf head has a ruby moon in the background. The werewolf gets 2 inches to the screen baring fangs then is cut off to show trees far away from the site. You can hear the pilot screaming for mercy, then nothing.
The camera moves to view the sky. It’s a full moon tonight. The werewolf runs to a cliff over a busy city. She sniffs, and then stands up. Blood is dripping from her chin. She howls, and then zooms up to her face. Her eyes are sanguine/ blood red. You can’t see and white part, like a dog. She howls a dark, evil, low howl. She through her arms behind her back when doing this. Her head covers the moon, like the amulet, and then all is black.
Intro over
Scene one
Next Day
In yet another house, a girl wakes up to her room. The room is covered in movie, book, and band posters, some being My Chemical Romance, Creature Feature, Akira, Twilight, Cirque Du Freak, Linkin Park, Demonata, and Primus. The alarm clock blares out Too Many Puppies by Primus. She gets out of bed and turn off her computer game, (Elder Scrolls IV Oblivion), which is playing soothing classical music. You just notice that she has a black wolf tail coming out of the back of her pants, wolf ears are sticking out of her hair, her eyes are amber with pupils, and all of the hair on her body is black. There is a hole in her pj’s to make it easier to have a tail. Her characters a Kajitt named Qua’Darr. He’s wearing a Black Hand Robe and Hood, and wielding Umbra, the Eater of Souls. In his inventory you see a Daedric Short sword, Daedric Bow, Daedric Arrows, 15 Daedric Long swords and The Gray Cowl of Nocturnal.
She quits out and starts playing ‘This is How I Disappear’ by My Chemical Romance. She runs over and turns off the alarm clock. She turns around and pulls off her shirt. She picks up a bra, puts it on, (Blocked from view) and then picks up a My Chemical Romance shirt with a skull made of the band name on the front.
She puts it on then grabs some dark blue jeans.
As she is looking at herself in the mirror on her wall, her mom walks in.
MOM: Allie, your first day of school in this town is today!
ALLIE: I know, I know. I’m getting ready.
MOM: Brush your teeth and stuff.
Allie runs into the bathroom down the hall and to the left. At the end there is a room with black walls. The door is open. Camera lingers to show you the room. On the floor there is a timber wolf sitting on a dog bed. The walls are painted to show a mural of a night sky. The moon is full, and sanguine in color. There is a small group of timber wolves, howling at the moon. The wolf gets up, yawns then walks down the carpet floor out to a room you can’t see. The camera then cuts to the bathroom. Allie is furiously brushing her teeth to the point you actually can’t see them. Suddenly she transforms her head to a wolf head. The wolf head is black and sleek. It looks somewhat like the jackal-headed Egyptian god. She spits out the toothpaste, and then examines her teeth to see if they are clean and noticeably white. She transforms back and runs out the door. Camera stays in the same position. Allie comes back half a second later and looks at her tail. She frowns and grabs a dog fur brush and starts brushing her tail. After half a minute it’s clean and shiny. She smiles as the other wolf comes in. He whines and sits down.
ALLIE: Sure Dad.
She starts grooming her wolf dad. Camera cuts to dinner table. Allie’s mom places 3 plates on the table, one full of raw chicken, one of raw steak, and another of pancakes and eggs. Allie sits down of the one full of raw chicken. Her dad climbs on a chair at the one full of steak. Mom sits down at the normal platter of food we all know and love. Her dad has to lean his head and bite off of the steak to eat it. Allie just picks it up and bites a huge chunk out then transforms her head to eat it all. Her dad chuckles in a wolf way. He seems to smile. Mom rolls her eyes.
MOM: Can you not do that at the table if you can help it?
Allie smiles but doesn’t reply. She transforms her head back though.
After breakfast.
Allie gathers her school stuff (folder, extra wrapped paper, pencils, pens, couple of books to read) in a My Chemical Romance messenger bag then puts it on. Her dad walks by with a cell phone balanced carefully in his tail. He barks, making Allie looks over her shoulder. She sees the phone and takes it out of her dads tail grip.
ALLIE: Thanks Dad. See you at 3!
Her dad sits down, looking a bit sad to see his kid leave so early in life. You can see Allie transforming into a wolf and running through the trees on the other side of the street through the windows on either side of the door. He soon gets over it and starts walking to the kitchen for some more leftover steak. Camera turns to show him stealing the steak off the counter and placing it on a plate left on the table. He jumps up on the chair to dig in. Outside
Allie quickly adjusted the strap on her backpack to stay around her waist instead of on her shoulder. She transformed and quickly ran through the trees. As she weaves through the trees, she thought about school. School works like this; the teachers separate the kids by the amount of animal and human DNA; so far Allie has been in either Hybrid or Animal sections. They separate you by your physical features and your personality. Then they make you take certain classes by what you’ll be when you grow up; like a mostly animal Red-Tailed Hawk Mix would either live in the wild or work with birds. So Allie is either going to live in the wild or work with dogs or wolves. So far, she wants to live in the wild. Allie blinks out of her daydream to find herself in front of the school. She looks it up and down, then sniffs, listens, and walks to the school. 15 other kids are coming in too, a German Shepard from the far left on a path beside the outer wall, a Mountain Lion 10 paces to the right, a Squirrel far ahead, 2 White Rhinos entering the building when Allie sniffs, a Grizzly and a Black bear side by side next to Allie, and 11 birds; a Toucan, 3 red Macaws, and assorted doves and finches. Allie enters the building and looks around. You see the 2 Rhinos shifting to ordinary twin brunette boys laughing at some Rhino joke. Allie watches them walk into an auditorium and sit down next to some brunette twin girls. Allie looks around and sees a Bontebok(small, brown gazelle) walk through the isles and shift into a blond boy before sitting down. She looked around and felt someone tap on her shoulder. She looked over her shoulder to see a teacher standing over her. The teacher pointed to a section all the way down and to the left.
TEACHER: Canines sit over there, next to the flying animals.
Allie put her tail in the middle and nodded. The teacher smiled and went to point out another kid. Allie walked down to the section, tail in the middle and no emotion. She stopped at an empty seat by a sleeping Black Labrador and transformed. When someone transformed, they’re inner aura glowed through into light that can be seen and changed them. Allie, a girl with the Hunter’s Instinct would have a rather dark aura; but being with good intentions, her aura is instead silver. Her body looked like liquid and melted into the shape of a rather unique girl. Camera pans to the right when transforming. When she’s done shifting she sits down and waits for the bell.
The bell doesn’t come, but a bunch of teachers do and start telling everyone where they are.
I don't know if this would work as a movie script, but it's worth a shot.
Please, no flames, but I would like constructive criticism.

Yes, my name is Meredith...


The summary is that a Wolf Animalia (half animal, half human) is being hunted down by the government for reasons unknown to her or her new friend Vicente, a Vampire Bat Animalia. Plus, she is one of the many new kids in an inner city school.
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THIS IS A PARTIAL STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!